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I see the beauty within you
Do you see it in me?
You're a girl with a heart
A girl with an open mind

Do you feel what I do?
Do you feel the chemistry?
I didn't expect this to happen
It was the furthest thing from my mind

But that's how it goes, isn't it?
Infatuation and hope springs up
When least expected
When my guard is down

Are you willing to try?
Do you get excited when you hear my name?
Like I do with yours?
My heart jumps when I see you

I want to take the chance
But I don't want to scare you away
I want to show you what we could be
I want to see you every day

I tell you my secrets
And you tell me yours
I hope you feel this, too
Or is it all in my head?
infatuated.
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soft-sound Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, everyone can understand this.
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LadyKiriTheFallen Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nice work
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BeansWithJelly Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Gaaahhh, I know how this feels! Lovely representation, you're a wonderful poet! :love:
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LapysFireFly Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
wonderful, so much feeling
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KeepersKeep Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Student Writer
thank you :)
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starlingthefairy Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Student General Artist
This is the perfect representation of a crush- it's cute, it's sweet, it's naive. It's hopeful.
Well done. 'Tis Lovely.
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KeepersKeep Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Student Writer
thanks!!
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starlingthefairy Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Student General Artist
No problem (:
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topec Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Cool poem, I can only imagine how hard it is to tell infatuation from love this early...
You got me thinking, this is a winner for sure :thumbsup:
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KeepersKeep Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
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